"once"

"once"

mmm. song, song, song. almost ready, with a killer chorus...or that's at least what someone said; he's already heard the blueprint of the thing. but really, it reads depressing but really is peppy.
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i'm crying baby
i'm taking it in
yea i'm taking everything
i'm lonely dying
fucking aye
i've got nothing left to lose
slowly burning
out tonight

once the world revolved around the two of us and we weren't grounded
now it seems that gravity has got the best of you and me
once the world revolved around the two of us, we were surrounded
now it seems that everything has dissipated to memory

why am i hanging 'round? i don't know

i'm lifting surface
kicking in
looking for a better choice
i'm falling rising
double glaze
now i've got a sun to cool
slowly burning
out tonight

[chorus]

you say you know what i believe
can't be the one who will receive
all it is you've got to give
go on, go on, go on, live
it's taking out of my own days
moving me in different ways
sobriety

[chorus]
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there's nothing like wailing away on your guitar. can't wait to finish this one.